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I miss you

door killea

I miss you

Looking for you
amongst the crowd
beyond the horizon
calling out loud

where are you my love
the one who takes care
of all, 'do you know where's
my buttons done up wrong

crystal tears shattered on kitchen tiles
cut my bare feet, Lady luck smiles

forgot to pack your baggage
to leave outside the door
it fills your heart with sorrows
chaser chasing the beer

when you disappear
into yourself
I miss you

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • Hoeselaar
    Als men zich verlaten voelt komen de traantjes vanzelf

    Willy
    killea: and there is no stopping them Willy
    xx
    j
  • hettie35
    Prachtig,
    groetjes Hettie
    killea: many thanks sweetheart
    xx
    j
  • Wee
    Beautiful, and your last verse, wow!

    x
    killea: many thanks for your lovely FB Wee
    xx
    j
  • jan
    there's a tear in my beer June, you can always change 'beer into deer' that gives the poem a whole different meaning...
    xxx
    j

    killea: indeed it does, don't tempt me Jan
    xxx
    j
  • aniram
    bring him/her back on your crystal ship, tears don't break tiles, they sweep your sorrows away.. heeeeeeeeel mooooooooooooi!!!!!!!!!
    killea: my ship is sinking Michel, and yes, they do sweep sorrows away
    Michel
    xx
    j
  • ivo
    mooi
    killea: thank you Ivo
    xx
    j
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