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Desolation

door killea

Desolation



She dreams of him now that he is gone
imagines she hears the beloved old song
but it's just a memory-filled yearning
all things that could have, did go wrong

in the morning she wakes in a cold bed
her body shivers for the warm embrace
drags herself out for the day ahead
wrenching sadness she would have to face

to the mirror she prays to a blurry image
she plays the music her eyes closed tight
let the tears stay inside, let the pain abide
she'll feel stronger later, much later tonight

too much, too soon, too hard, too bare
a little helper from the medicine chest
to see a little clearer through teary mist
his face goes blank, she had done her best

as the unseen sun sets the cloudiest day
she remembers all that was right and good
rain splatters on the window pain
what went wrong and never should

she dreams of him now that he is gone…

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • hettie35
    Liefdevol geschreven, knap!
    Wens je een fijn weekend,
    groetjes Hettie
    killea: many thanks Hettie
    love
    June
  • alie_jankind
    ik sluit aan bij Martine ...

    lieve groet
    killea: thank you Alie
    xx
    j
  • ivo
    herinneringen altijd is speciaal
    killea: sometimes, Ivo
    xx
    j
  • Wee
    Reading your words, I hear Bob Dylan,
    crying his Desolation Row ...

    killea: Super feed, thank you Wee
    xx
    j
  • martine
    "De mensen van 'voorbij' , zij blijven met ons leven, in liefde, in verhalen, die wij zo graag herhalen, in bloemengeuren, in een lied dat opklinkt uit verdriet." Hanna Lam

    vol emotie neergeschreven
    stilmakend mooi
    xx


    killea: many, many thanks Martine for your fine FB
    xx
    j
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