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Face
Face
Golden honey threw sparkles
on the water, shimmering
warmth tenderly kissed my face
to linder and dry my tears
an empathic helper took my hand
held it for a while so I could face
the burning pain of loss
surging defeat had grounded
a vision appeared in the mirror
held up to me by kindness
beyond the wreckage and sorrow
strength smiled through to my face
feedback van andere lezers- Hoeselaar
Het gelaat in de spiegel is een vreemde, het doet alles wat jij doet en toch heeft het geen ziel
Willy killea: thank you Willy
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j - Wee
Beautiful.
x killea: many thanks Wee
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j - martine
als de spiegel je terug laat beleven killea: many thanks Martine
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j - ivo
je kan het zo mooi vatten june, mooi hoor killea: Many thanks for your fine feedback Ivo
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j - alie_jankind
de spiegel laat je weer de hoop proeven...
groet killea: thank you alie
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j - Aramis
what a wonder(full)land you're living in, Alice ! killea: Yes, you clever thing. The Queen of hearts wants to behead me, the King has lost his heart to a tart, and I am truly down the rabbit hole, shrinking and growing, whatever is going.
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j - marrik
Mijn spiegelbeeld is mij niet vreemd.
I like him
M killea: good for you M
xxx
j
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