writehi(s)story Passie voor schrijven
home   wat is writehi(s)story?   bladeren   uitgeven   gezamenlijke publicaties   boekenwinkel   manuscriptanalyse   inschrijven   contact   
top 10   wedstrijden   forum   hulp   
 
naam:  
pass:  


wachtwoord vergeten?
 
 

Volg ons op facebook

Ga naar chat

< terug

Betere leesbaarheid

Illusion

door killea

Illusion


As my words float on the surf
looking for comprehensible cohesion
some go here and some go there
but none find the sought adhesion
so despairing in the battle of the sexes
leaving a trail of tears along the strand
waves throw the words back to the shore
and for a moment one can understand
words of love will always return
the universe knows about collusion
sea pulls the letters back into the deep
and one's heart believes all was illusion



http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VGJaKeYwOFo&feature=related

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • Aramis
    it was more than a feeling, wasn't it ?
    killea: indeed, much, much more than an illusion
    xx
    j
  • jan
    save some for tomorrow please!
    xxx
    j

    killea: will do Jan
    xxx
    j
  • Wee
    Like a wave of tears.
    Beautiful!
    x
    killea: yes Wee thank you
    xx
    j
  • Danvoieanne
    Beautiful xx
    killea: thank you Anne
    xx
    j
  • ivo
    tja june je zet het hier wel mooi neer ... pfff
    killea: Many thanks Ivo
    xx
    j
Er zijn 5 bezoekers online, waarvan 0 leden: .