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Apart Art

door killea

Apart Art





Apart from some of my dearest friends
(M being the first)
you were the only one who ever said
you were proud of me

apart from some of my sweet lovers
you were the only one
who said you adored me

apart from all my husbands
you were the only one
who understood me

apart from everyone else
you were the only one
whom I ever loved so deep

apart from everyone else
you were the only one
who treated me so cheap

now we're apart
every day anew I listen
to the breaking of my heart

nothing is breaking
since we are apart
except my soul cracked for its mate

apart from my soul, heart and body
we each carry on hurting apart
it's like the beginning of a piece of art

a picture distorted like a Picasso
painted by an insane genius
people look at me saying she's falling apart

I tell them it's just the art, its just art
by an artist who paints me falling apart
each section alone, apart






 

feedback van andere lezers

  • Mistaker
    Such a beautiful poem June!

    Greta xx
    killea: Thank you so much Greta
    xx
    j
  • springie
    It gives me goosebumps...
    It starts so lovely and than the curtain falls...
    (forgive me my english, if it's written wrong...) :-)
    beautiful....

    greetz!
    killea: your english is perfect, thank you so much for reading and FB
    xx
    j
  • jan
    you got art!
    xxx
    j
    killea: Yes and Art is a good friend too!
    xxx
    j
  • warket
    spijtig dat ik zo weinig engels versta maar de clou begrijp ik wel
    killea: thank you so much Warket
    xx
    j
  • ivo
    wat een liefdes lied - kunst op zijn best - zing het eens hardop? mooi hoor
    killea: many many thanks Ivo
    xx
    j
  • Danvoieanne
    Beautiful xx
    killea: thank you Anne
    xx
    j
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