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Betere leesbaarheid

veel liefs and more

door killea

With love and more…

In her big empty bed sleep falls slow
where was her beloved now
to stroke her body as he did
did he watch her go
painfully slow

and all that needs to be said
who will be in his big bed
tomorrow or Sunday when one breaks bread
did he not hear
the sound of her fear

his life and hers connected
finding the sum of expected
how grand it had been
everyone who had seen
the strength of love in between

so troublesome infected
now they wait as time will tell
if all is lost or all is well
who comes to his door
for all his love and more..?

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • ivo
    knap hoor ..
    killea: thank you Ivo
    xx
    j
  • alie_jankind
    knap gedicht!

    lieve groet
    killea: thanks Alie
    xx
    j
  • martine
    zucht zo mooi
    xx
    killea: many thanks Martine
    xx
    j
  • Danvoieanne
    Super mooi xx
    killea: many thanks Anne
    xx
    j
  • lief
    more than a poem June:-)
    xxx
    liefs
    killea: Thank you so much Lief, and you are right again
    xxx
    j
  • Wee
    I sluit aan with Lief ;)
    Beautiful, Killea!
    x
    killea: Thank you so much Wee
    xx
    j
  • Hoeselaar
    Zoals gewoonlijk, prima

    Willy
    killea: thank you Willy
    xx
    j
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