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Genie and Cane Toad VI

door killea

(For those who do not know the story of Genie and Cane Toad will have to go back to the start Genie and Cane Toad 28-05-2009, if you can be bothered (adults only).)


Genie lies in his bottle depressed
his old mate Toady, in his place had confessed
instead of Genie, Toady went to jail
and I decided not to post any bail
we got him a lawyer, another greenish thing
a lawyer with a legal sting
he did his best but the facts were clear
Toady went down for at least a year
initially Genie was unconcernedly fine
but now he missed his partner in crime
I gave him Fukitols, the miracle pills
supposed to cure all those mental ills
nevertheless, he could find no cheer
not even after a crate of his favourite beer
no interest in anything simple or complex
especially not in the opposite sex
which, for a passionate woman as myself
a genie was useless if sitting bottled on the shelf
I finally caved in, said we'd visit his mate
and as we stood at the prison gate
he perked up completely, his eyes gave a sparkle
you'd think he'd had nothing to do with the debacle
smiling the cane toad sat there waiting
I knew that no-good grin, always so irritating
I told him he could drop the masquerade
he said he was fine, made a lot of new mates
wheeling and dealing to pay his lawyer's rates
there was no doubt he would be home real soon
and with the new Toady the three of us could spoon
I told him Ugh! You know I'd rather die
and if he came near me his chubby legs I'd fry
I left the two alone, the bottled bloody geek
and the disgusting, greenish, amphibious freak

Toady came home a couple of weeks later
on his right leg tattooed an allligator
a teardrop under his left eye
to show he was such a tough guy
his tongue piercing had been removed
the chief warden had not approved
his lisper had been a source of such laughter
a lispered croak, an audio disaster
his sex life had taken on a new direction
I won't go into that sordid section
Genie got over his deep depression
begged to resume our physical session
it was a delight to have his old-self back
but I knew I would have to keep vigilant track
of what those two would be up to next
the aberrations, no doubt, in my following text

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • ivo
    het leest erg depri ... en ik weet niet of ik zo goed ben in mijn Engels om het achterste van deze tong te kunnen lezen, het zwarte leest als ondertoon en dat zegt me 'genoeg' hoe de feelings zijn ...
    killea: many thanks Ivo
    xx
    j
  • Danvoieanne
    Gglezen
    killea: thank you Anne
    xx
    j
  • Wee
    I've done my homework and have read all your G and CT poems.
    Love them all (ánd the feeds).
    Now I'm tired, it was a tough job ;)
    x
    killea: Well Wee, I truly appreciate the effort and feedback
    thank you so much
    xxx
    j
  • Hoeselaar
    Wat is er aan de hand dat je zo zwaarmoedig schrijft, moeten we ons zorgen maken?

    Willy
    killea: no Willy,
    many thanks
    xx
    j
  • jan
    it took a few days to enjoy your poem June, I think it's a masterpiece!!!
    xxx
    j
    killea: thank you so much Jan love
    xxx
    j
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