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When all have left…

door killea

When all have left…


When all have left
alone I will find myself
search for the deepest
seek out the dark seclusion
the place I know the best

my lover will go
in a day or two
already I feel the tug
into the sadness left behind
underfoot the pull of the rug

love of my existence
will leave in seven days
travelling homeward again
she, the light of my life
tears flow, embark the plane

when all have left
can I find myself
without their reflections
or will my mirror show
lost without directions

a life of departures
is no mean feat
chains of love extended
so far over the globe
this time the tears
will flow like the waterfall
of my survival dreams
of all that was and has been
just echoing in salty streams


 

feedback van andere lezers

  • hettie35
    Heftig en inneg en o zo mooi,
    groetjes Hettie
    killea: thank you for your fine feedback Hettie
    xxx
    j
  • Wee
    A very moving poem, Killea.
    x
    killea: thank you Wee
    xx
    j
  • Danvoieanne
    Ontroerend, gretzz xx
    killea: thank you Anne
    xx
    j
  • jan
    .......
    xxx
    j
    killea: Thank you so much Jan
    xxx
    j
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