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Waking Nightmare

door killea

Waking Nightmare

Disturbing words written
it pains one so to read
once so very smitten
forever so much need
not knowing what to do
recognizing all the effort
made to prepare for life
nothing ever is right
everything leads to strife

every now and then
a meaty bone is thrown
to chew on for a while
no pleasure in the unknown
the crown fell at his feet
and shattered on the floor
it was only made of glass
he's still a prisoner of war

as he tries to heal
with all the help at hand
nothing seems to work
it flicks back like a rubber band
and all the love is worthless
to a scab that will not close
promises 'nothing more, nothing less'
cruel words to juxtapose

solace and compassion
hope one day he will see
the understanding and love
was reflected unabashed by me



 

feedback van andere lezers

  • ivo
    so nice ... het zwarte schilt als een maan die niet schijnt ...
    killea: Indeed thank you Ivo
    xx
    j
  • hettie35
    Een schitterende steunende liefdeseed, knap June.
    xxx Hettie
    killea: many thanks Hettie
    xx
    j
  • Danvoieanne
    Heel mooi xx
    killea: thank you Anne
    xx
    j
  • Wee
    Beautiful poetry.
    x
    killea: thank you Wee
    xx
    j
  • jan
    Yes I am
    xxx
    j
    killea: Yes you are Jan
    xxx
    j
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