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Collecting shells

door killea

Collecting shells


Saw the beauty in a broken shell
I found you on the shore
took you with me,
like the orphans I did before

the shell was not empty
just injured I saw
held you high, gently, slowly
your strength to restore

wisps of stories of oceans you'd crossed
you would tell me in the night
held you to my ear to hear the sea
listened to your deepest plight

and as your shell renewed itself
you discovered the I in you too
a lost ego found its character
to which you will be true

now I wonder if I shouldn't
throw you back into the sea
to continue your own journey
let your soul swim free

if your shell should break once more
and it was meant to be
I'll find you on the shore again
as you return to me…

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • ivo
    je bent er me eentje killea, best eens benieuwd hoe jullie relatie in irl eruit ziet ... sjongens je bent me een madam
    killea: Not quite sure about your FB. Regarding relatie irl, you tell me yours then I'll tell you mine, and yes, I am a lady (most of the time) and not a woman running a bordello. Thank you Ivo
    xx
    j
  • Hoeselaar
    Een nietszeggende schelp die haar geheimen nog verborgen houdt moet terug in't water om verder te dromen

    Willy
    killea: ja so ist es Willy
    xx
    j
  • Wee
    Wow, how beautiful, Killea.
    x
    killea: thank you sweetheart
    xx
    j
  • Danvoieanne
    Heel mooi xx
    killea: many thanks Anne
    xx
    j
  • jan
    save some for me June
    xxx
    j
    killea: will do Jan
    xxx
    j
  • aramis
    The never ending story of the only immortal creature on earth : the sea
    killea: It has many stories to tell!
    xx
    j
  • alie_jankind
    mooi deze!!

    groet
    killea: thank you Alie
    xx
    j
  • lin
    Fantastisch sprookje is hier beschreven, zou zomaar echt kunnen gebeuren.. gr lin
    killea: it is more metaphoric than sprookje but thank you very much
    for reading me
    xx
    j
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