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Betere leesbaarheid

Too much

door killea

Too much

spread out before us
a smorgasbord of scenes
it is but a journey
of endless nightmares
or dreams

when the time has come
to speak, silence prevails
as all the pretty pictures
flits through the brain
the train derails

damages were done
try wipe the slate clean
so much to lose in words
that will not be heard
but eyes have seen

the seal was broken
as it poured with rain
fall over the threshold
crystal palace hides
inner tears again

yet the sun always shines
in her room, a soft touch
she gives moments of peace

in the chair where I sit
it rains too much

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • Danvoieanne
    Too much ....gretzzxx
    killea: many thanks Anne
    xx
    j
  • ivo
    nice nice
    killea: thank you Ivo
    xx
    j
  • Wee
    Great poem, Killea.
    (And thanks for the smile.)
    x
    killea: thank you Wee
    xxx
    j
  • jan
    maybe this song will cheer you up:-)
    xxx
    j
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ll5kMQHJ814&feature=related
    killea: many thanks Jan
    xxx
    j
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