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Betere leesbaarheid

Deaf, dumb, blind and stupid

door killea

Deaf, dumb, blind and stupid

How blind are men
when they have a good woman
how deaf to their simple needs
how dumb in their responses
how stupid in their panting(s)

how much has one cried
over father, brother , husband, lover
an ocean filled with tears

how blind are women
when they love a 'bad boy'
how deaf to all the advice
how dumb to think he will change
how stupid to stay long after love dies

once up a time
all fairytales begin, and with a happy end
in the silence lie the lies untold
in between, the shit hits the fan
but in the end all grateful for the fall
that once, at least, there was love at all

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oLa6ly7jrpk&feature=watch_response
I wanted to know
What I have done
I wanted to know
It's bad

I wanted to know
What I have done
I want to know
Right now

maybe this time tomorrow
or it may be today
It is now alright
Now it's better
Now we'll know
Now you'll know what I have done.

I'm Singin' with you
Singing in silence
Let's sing into the years, like one
Singing in tune, together
A sound for no one
Let's sing in tune, but now
It's home

Let's sing into the night now
Just sing on for me
Let's sing into the night, oh

(hopelandic)

You : oooooh ooh ooh ooh
You stand next to me alright


 

feedback van andere lezers

  • Danvoieanne
    Nice
    killea: thank you Anne
    xx
    j
  • ivo
    wat een lied ... holalala
    killea: I don't know what holalalala means Ivo, but I hope you can explain love
    xx
    j
  • lief
    alles went behalve een vent June;-)
    xxx
    liefs
    killea: tja het is hoe het is Lief
    xxx
    j
  • Wee
    Great poem, especially your last verse (once up a time ...)
    x

    killea: many thanks Wee
    xx
    j
  • nachtdwaas
    the sound of the silents; you can still hear it when you listen
    gglezen
    Paul
    killea: indeed you can Paul
    xx
    j
  • jan
    mau is right June, so I keep distance...
    xxx
    j
    killea: too many bumps on the head, Jan?
    xxx
    j
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