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Winter Sun

door killea

See the spectrum of colours
the reds, the orange, the gold
tinged grey, streaks of blues
sinking on the horizon
vivid changeling, into the sea
with all her magnificent hues
the cool winter sun
slowly seeping, dipping through
slipping away, leaving behind
streams of radiant fire,
heart, do you see it too?


 

feedback van andere lezers

  • elpe
    yes, I do...
    killea: good for you Elpe
    xx
    j
  • jan
    autumncolours whereever people go
    xxx
    j
    killea: thank you Jan
    xxx
    j
  • yellow
    I see but the most people are looking to their windows-screen to look for some poems like this
    killea: thank you sweetheart
    xxx
    j
  • greta
    Yes.
    True colors.
    killea: There is much to say to a beautiful sunset these cloudy days
    thank you Greta
    xx
    j
  • Danvoieanne
    Yes xx
    killea: many thanks Anne
    xx
    j
  • andremoortgat
    I've seen it without my spectacles !
    In flemish they say :"Goe bezig"!
    killea: Goe bezig indeed. One never stops learning, thank you Andre
    xx
    j
  • Aramis
    yes, and even the white and yellow carves of planes heading overseas ...
    killea: Yes, Aramis, a work of art
    xx
    j
  • fairy
    I just love the winter I can taste in your poem. Those very cold icy mornings when everything still seems to sleep and then the sky colours just beautiful the way you describe it.

    Wendy x
    killea: Thank you Wendy
    xx
    j
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