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Shattered

door killea

Shattered


Shattered, beyond repair
smashed it crumbled
into little pieces
some caught in the web
of glistening memories
seeing eyes, flooded
cheated by blindness
here lies, born and bred
like mould reappear
the repertoire limitless
pain unrelenting
from the cuts of collecting
shards of destruction
reminded that one man's trash
is another's treasure
at what point will the glue stick
to put it all together
the bleeding red crystal
was just common glass
too fragile for the emotive crash
into the abyss of too late
there will be no redemption
no contention…nothing
just irreparable regrets
as the final goodbye
is heard in the distance
silent, cold in the dead of night
giving up, surrendering
to the end…


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AsaetGf5cdU

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • warket
    Dit gedicht zou ik aan vuurvrouw op haar verjaardag willen schenken.
    killea: You do that Warket, thank you
    xx
    j
  • Danvoieanne
    Nice ...xx
    killea: Thank you Anne
    xx
    j
  • andremoortgat
    A bit of old Shatterhand !
    (Where is Winitou ?)
    (If I may... with May ?)
    killea: You may with May Andre
    xx
    j
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