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A Promise

door killea

A Promise



You came in the night
your gun and ID false or true
vaguely remembered your face
in a haze of sleepy blue
you came and took with force
what was not yours to have
the smell of alcohol
on your fetid breath
angry, vicious and insane
you hurt me physically
but my spirit will not
be broken again
in an Aha moment I knew
from where and who you are
I do not threat, but promise
your problems are not far
look over your shoulder
one day soon I will be
with an Angel from hell
a guide beside me
to teach you about rage
hatred, humiliation and pain
a promise for reflection
next time you have
a frustrated erectionů

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • jan
    painfull poetry....
    killea: indeed painful Jan
    xxx
    j
  • andremoortgat
    I hope hate
    doesn't kill
    your good-feelings
    killea: I won't let it, Andre
    xx
    j
  • yellow
    long tima ago isn't it, lovely poem, straight like always x
    killea: thank you Marc
    xxx
    j
  • joplin
    Snijden doet het, deze pijn
    xx
    killea: Indeed it does, Joplin
    xx
    j
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