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Too Long
Too long
to long too long
painfilled and sad
a sorrow void
I've been hanging on
to plans, dreams, love,
hopes and memories
which are forever gone
universal intelligence
will not guide me wrong
but moved me to let go,
let go for good upon
the wayward winds
the westward sun
I let go, let go, and move on…
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mooi
xx killea: many thanks joplin, also for your comment under your poem.
xx
j - hettie35
Heel intens June, knap.
Liefs hettie killea: many thanks love
xxx
j - rainbowstyling
nice ,
we come across what we have to come across even though we don't always understand why.
grtz Nell killea: so it is Nell
xx
j - andremoortgat
Always moving
a part of the living world
in the eternal search
for happiness killea: indeed Andre
xx
j - jan
It's always better to let go and only remember good times
xxx killea: perhaps its better to remember the bad Jan
xxx
j - bragt
goedgekozen woorden die het 'definitieve' uitdrukken killea: thank you so much Bragt
xx
j - Annelies
Move on...., I like these words, they give a brighter future :) Mooi! killea: wishful thinking Annelies
xx
j - CHRIS
de wereld is een beter plaats
wie goed zoekt
komt de hemel tegen killea: I'll wait for heaven to find me...thanks Chris
xx
j - Danvoieanne
Mooi... killea: many thanks Anne
xx
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