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Too Long

door killea

Too long


to long too long
painfilled and sad
a sorrow void
I've been hanging on
to plans, dreams, love,
hopes and memories
which are forever gone
universal intelligence
will not guide me wrong
but moved me to let go,
let go for good upon
the wayward winds
the westward sun
I let go, let go, and move on…

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • joplin
    mooi
    xx
    killea: many thanks joplin, also for your comment under your poem.
    xx
    j
  • hettie35
    Heel intens June, knap.
    Liefs hettie
    killea: many thanks love
    xxx
    j
  • rainbowstyling
    nice ,
    we come across what we have to come across even though we don't always understand why.
    grtz Nell
    killea: so it is Nell
    xx
    j
  • andremoortgat
    Always moving
    a part of the living world
    in the eternal search
    for happiness
    killea: indeed Andre
    xx
    j
  • jan
    It's always better to let go and only remember good times
    xxx
    killea: perhaps its better to remember the bad Jan
    xxx
    j
  • bragt
    goedgekozen woorden die het 'definitieve' uitdrukken
    killea: thank you so much Bragt
    xx
    j
  • Annelies
    Move on...., I like these words, they give a brighter future :) Mooi!
    killea: wishful thinking Annelies
    xx
    j
  • CHRIS
    de wereld is een beter plaats
    wie goed zoekt
    komt de hemel tegen
    killea: I'll wait for heaven to find me...thanks Chris
    xx
    j
  • Danvoieanne
    Mooi...
    killea: many thanks Anne
    xx
    j
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