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Out of my depth

door killea

Like a fish at the end of your line
struggling to get free
then a false safety net
lifted, out of my dreamy sea
hook removed, I cannot breathe
blinded by the light
I can no longer see

you held out a future
proposed and gave me a ring
said everything would be perfect
in happiness we would sing
there would be no limit
to which we could fly
the roll of the drums rock
we're headed for the sky
but for all purposes
you clipped my right wing

birds that cannot fly
fish that cannot swim
love that has no basis
built on a muddy whim
books that won't be read
words that remain unspoken
in a hotel's well-used bed
your beauty and attraction
will all end up dead

like a fish at the end of your line
struggling to get free
then a false safety net
lifted, out of my dreamy sea
hook removed, I cannot breathe
baby, I am blinded by the light
I can no longer see

out of my depths
I can no longer see…

you clipped my wing
I can no longer fly…

hear the drums beat
as I slowly die..


 

feedback van andere lezers

  • Danvoieanne
    Gevoelig neergezet xx

    killea: Many thanks love
    xx
    j
  • andremoortgat
    Clip the ring and get your freedom
    and dance when the drums beat ...
    killea: Will do Andre
    xx
    j
  • hettie35
    Liefde kan soms ook verstikkend zijn,
    mooi geschreven.
    Groetjes Hettie
    killea: You are so right Hettie love
    xxx
    j
  • jan
    don't get hooked by the same fisherman again:-)
    xxx
    j
    killea: No, that would be hook, line and sinker
    xxx
    j
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