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Dissimilar

door killea

Dissimilar



Here I stand alone
the next episode, waiting
heat chills me to the bone
my mind with itself debating

you, and you return again
to try and make things right
all the efforts seem in vain
sun and moon shine so bright
but they are not the same

the patience of paper
hours disappear unnoticed
like invisible lingering vapour
tears leave me unfocussed

merry-go-round of confusion
pretty pictures painted
only to create an illusion
of something beautiful, untainted
heart on my sleeve, in diffusion

what I want plays no role
the I in me, watches, game
the knowledge of my soul
I cannot claim my flame

you, and you return again
to try and make things right
I care only for the last refrain
the star that shines so bright
between us, years of light

as I wander day and night
sun and moon shine so bright
but they are not the same

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • Danvoieanne
    gretzzz xx

    killea: Thank you Anne
    xx
    j
  • Aramis
    "I am constant as the northern star,
    Of whose true-fix'd and resting quality
    There is no fellow in the firmament."


    killea: “The skies are painted with unnumber'd sparks,
    They are all fire and every one doth shine,
    But there's but one in all doth hold his place:
    So in the world; 'tis furnish'd well with men,
    And men are flesh and blood, and apprehensive;
    Yet in the number I do know but one
    That unassailable holds on his rank,
    Unshaked of motion: and that thou be he,
    Let me a little show it, even in this;
    And constant do remain to keep thee so.”
  • andremoortgat
    "There is no fellow in the firmament "
    said Aramis, maar ik wil wedden voor 10 cent
    dat jij (een deel) de nieuwe Shakespeare bent
    killea: Ha ha, I wish... Andre
    xx
    j
  • drebddronefish
    Gaze your finger far far away, from the moon to the sun, and come back then to yourself. I wonder, could you set a point after that?

    leuk je nog eens te lezen

    groetjes
    killea: wonderful to hear from you again Manuel
    xx
    j
  • hettie35
    Ontroerend geschreven,
    liefs Hettie
    killea: many thanks Hettie
    xxx
    j
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