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Wings (four senryu)

door killea



Wings


closer than ever
your wings will carry you back
dream of your next leave


your own wings at hand
you cannot leave your command
long distance love stand


it is still at night
five hour difference apart
sunrise on your wings


Angel has no wings
each day dearest meet on line
love flies through the air


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ny4izkgnX_k

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • Vardar
    it's exactly the wings that make love difficult to follow...
    killea: 'they' also say set your lover free and if it was meant to be, he/she will return to you. Also crap: there's a smorgasbord out there! Thanks for comment Vardar
    xx
    j
  • andremoortgat
    Gone with the wind..
    Like your "leaves and wings"
    said Windekind
    killea: thank you Andre
    xx
    j
  • jan
    it's good that we can be online...
    xxx
    j
    killea: yes it is Jan
    xxx
    j
  • Aramis
    you're a very good stewaress, killea !
    killea: Yes, Jan, I am...
    xx
    j
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