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Dart

door killea

Dart





For heaven's sake, try as I may,
my moon only a third tonight
I will not, no, I will not weep today
still, as you disappear, night after night
until you eclipse with the sun
I bow my head, as your soul takes flight
love bears witness to your name
a heart rendering warmth trickles
down my feverish cheeks again
the dreams are gone, making room
for something else, hopefully
along with the new full moon
but you were and are the dart
which will be embedded
for ever in my beating heart

"Love's not Time's fool, though rosy lips and cheeks
Within his bending sickle's compass come:
Love alters not with his brief hours and weeks,
But bears it out even to the edge of doom.
If this be error and upon me proved,
I never writ, nor no man ever loved." S.

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • Danvoieanne
    NICE XXX
    killea: thank you Anne
    xx
    j
  • andremoortgat
    Full moon en darts...
    but the sun never sleeps
    call her welcome in our hearts
    killea: will the sun mend my broken heart? Andre
    thank you for reading me
    xx
    j
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