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Damned

door killea

Damned



Damned if I do, damned if I don't
rain pouring down in torrents
my moon disappeared
behind long, cloudy nights
so dark and cold, like you inside
ever present your long shadow
reaching out, grabbing me
my sight is blurred
just like another night
clocks do not tick anymore
losing days, searching for your light
I have seen the gold, so splendid
three stars, too many, I counted
read the book of disenchantment
I wrote it, lived it, breathed it
listened to the throb of my blood
every vein screaming retreat
every heart beat thumping love
step through the arch
in my hand a dying dove
so light, so soft, so frozen
damned if I do, damned if I don't
damned if I will, damned if I won't
damned into obscurity
loved beyond endurance
pernicious is the end

 

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  • andremoortgat
    Clocks tick furthermore
    in spite of pernicious fever
    and further on...
    nobody is damned ...
    (f you want so)
    killea: tick, tock, tick, tock...........thanks Andre
    xx
    j
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