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Don't forget me…

door killea

Don't forget me…




As you travel on
to the hard music
you must face
rememberance of fantasy
when each word
was an open embrace
the nights were short
and days were long
not a word to abort
believing in you
love in my heart
giving was at it's best
solely all I could do
still I live in the memory
though I set you free
magical moments in time
don't forget me
don't forget me
don't forget me



http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K1FV4hX4S6g

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • andremoortgat
    don't forget me
    I don't
    killea: thank you Andre
    xx
    j
  • dichtduvel
    Killea, I won't, j
    killea: I'm glad about that, Jef
    xx
    j
  • warket
    Zij-bij-mij heeft het gedicht voor mij vertaald;
    killea: goed zo, Warket
    xx
    j
  • jan
    how could I!
    xxx
    j
    killea: yes, how could you?
    xxx
    j
  • dovan
    Alzheimer maybe around the corner
    will be dificult not to forget
    grtz
    killea: fuck alzheimer, it is just matter of the mind, and if you don
    't mind it doesn't matter love
    xx
    j
  • vink
    Maar waarom in het Engels?
    killea: Thank you. As for your question, I am not very good at written Dutch, and don't have the feeling for poetry in the Dutch language
    unfortunately. If I could write anything as close to the wonderful poets on this site, I surely would, Vink
    xx
    j
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