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Betere leesbaarheid

Largo

door killea

Largo



We take it slow

there is no other way

being lost is the feeling

as the violins glide

over the strings of my heart

proclaiming, the need

so much to learn and know

my adoration, prayers

to set things right, remain unheard

in the dead of a blue night

my tears, like a thousand stars

slipping through my fingers,

diamonds, which I cannot hold

the music lingers, the days all

so very cold without you

love drowns me as I ride

the waves of an emotional tide,

silently, slow, it must be so…



© Killea





http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0gtPwoptKKw

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • greta
    Huizenhoog kippevel hier Killea.
    Compliments.
    killea: Many thanks for your fine FB Greta
    xx
    j
  • andremoortgat
    Waves of an emotional tide,
    as the violins glide
    drowns me as I ride
    Beautiful !
    killea: thank you so much Andre
    xx
    j
  • joplin
    cosi triste cosi bella
    questa poesia
    un desiderio
    questo lamento
    xx
    killea: molti, molti, ringraziamenti, Joplin
    xx
    j
  • Mistaker
    Very beautiful poem June!

    Greta xx
    killea: thank you Greta for your fine FB
    xx
    j
  • bragt
    unity
    killea: thank you bragt
    xx
    j
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