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I saw you...

door killea

I saw you…



I saw you in the distance, changed,
yet still the same
in the wet sand
I wrote your name

you seemed taller, rearranged,
at the place again
to see once more
now it seems insane

here we are so estranged,
out to the choppy sea
you looked afar
right past the ghost of me

I saw you in the distance, changed,
at your name
the water lapped
extinguishing the flame

it wasn't you
it wasn't me
it was the nemesis
of the sea

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vs0J9Fhx9wI&feature=related

feedback van andere lezers

• andremoortgat
  I saw a cold Nemesis recently....
  called "winter" and she had no time to
  receive a waiting Spring
  killea: she is vicious this year Andre
  xx
  j
• greta
  Wraakgodinnen? Die zijn keihard.
  
  Mooie tekst Killea.
  killea: indeed they are Greta
  xx
  j
• dovan
  but it was me
  who saw you
  in words
  mooi
  grtn
  killea: I'm glad you did dovan
  xx
  j

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