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Venting

door killea

Venting




You wrote the greatest love mail
I have ever longed to receive
yet the wind blows into the balloon
and I know it will burst real soon
there is a difference between us
knowing this, I know there'll be a fuss
confusion reigns and love remains
a configuration, a coagulation of trust
you cannot begin to imagine
the ramifications of what you ask
as in the fantasy of love you bask
I know the deal, and it ain't real
love does not rely on fashion
it is a fusion of hearts in union
a depth of deepest passion
where truth and trust an absolute must
like a balloon full of hot air
with the slightest overtones will bust
and I love you for your intent
though why, only heaven knows
how much you live to torment
as you leave me to my misery
the time, and distance to repent

 

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  • andremoortgat
    Like a balloon full of hot air...
    Who the f.... shows so much flair ?
    killea: That, dear Watson, is the question!
    xx
    j
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