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Waiting II

door killea

Waiting





There are moments in time
when one looks at someone
hears their voice, every nuance
surprise hits, as the heart fills
with overwhelming fullness
a knowing that it will be embedded
like a diamond set in gold
forever, and never despite odds
will that moment be forgotten
feeling the impact of perfecting
one's history, with that picture
touched by the stars mirrored
in eyes and on broad shoulders,
manifestation of a memory
so dear, one daydreams, still,
awaiting his remorseless return…



"He whom loves touches not walks in darkness." Plato

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • andremoortgat
    "Manifestation of a memory"...
    and Plato knows !
    killea: thank you dear Andre
    xx
    j
  • jan
    when Harry met Sally.....

    superbeautiful June!!!

    xxx
    killea: nice to read you again Jan, thank you
    xxx
    j
  • greta
    Your poems are beautifull.
    killea: Thank you so much sweetheart, appreciate you reading me
    xx
    j
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