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all of you

door Fushigidane

this thing i call love
the beauty of a dove
is where i found it before
but always i needed more

never has it been like this
what i knew only as a wish
i've found a part of me
forever may it be

i love the all of you
not the all you knew
but the all i see
forever may it be

all i see i adonise
might be blind but still have eyes
only for the things i know
i know nothing but i grow

nothing of what you find as world
which slowly becomes unfurled
teaching me evermore
what it is to adore

i love you too much to try to lie
still truth i can only spy
however strange it seems
truth is rare as good dreams

feedback van andere lezers

• danvoieanne
  good!
  Fushigidane: dank
• Clodius
  This poem is true love ! Heel geslaagd !
  Fushigidane: dank, fijn dat begrip

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