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Nemesis (60-word story)

door killea

Nemesis


He hurt her as hard as possible. She stood her ground. took the round, and
gave back what she could. Her efforts in vain, she was to blame.
In his world she was to condemn, forgotten good a crying shame. He never noticed
in his angry, busy with pointing of his finger, her nemesis had long died.

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • ivo
    nice
    killea: thank you Ivo
    xx
    j
  • Wee
    I read it a few times (it's a hard one), but great, Killea.
    x
    killea: thank you Wee
    xx
    j
  • jan
    I Know love....
    xxx
    j
    killea: of course you know Jan
    xxx
    j
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