naam:
	pass:
	wachtwoord vergeten?

Volg ons op facebook

Ga naar chat

< terug

)

door killea

feedback van andere lezers

• Francis
  Je beschrijft de oude lift heel goed maakt het spannend, er had iets meer over het 'moment supreme' verteld kunnen worden, ik bedoel wanneer de lift stopt. Al met al wel een leuk verhaal
  xx Frans
  killea: Thanks Frans, you give me confidence to carry on.
  
  xx
  June
• Ghislaine
  Masterart. Welcome in this writershome.
  killea: Thank you so much.
  regards
  June
• marrik
  Ga door... Ik wil meer...véél meer.
  
  read you
  killea: Thanks, Marrik appreciate your feedback.
  xx
  june
• Mistaker
  Veelbelovend, heel graag gelezen.
  
  Groet,
  Greta
  killea: Thank you, Greta
  
  June
• aquaangel
  ik kan Engels lezen, maar het is wel heel tijdrovend en dan nog voel ik de letters dan minder goed...
  
  dus als je het niet erg vindt, dan houd ik het bij je gedichten en als ik tijd over heb dan...........
  
  
  liefs ;)
  killea: That is perfect, Angel. thank you
  June
• klaver4
  I thought I started to read you in a new story, but Francis referred to a story about a lift, so here I am ;o)
  I like your style of writing !! My favourite writer is Andrew Miller; his writing comes close to poetry.
  xx
  killea: Thank you Klaver4
  
  xx
  June
• Mephistopheles
  I guess I have a long way to go if I'm going to be reading all of these but good writing is worth the trouble.
  killea: Hi Bert, Appreciate you reading me and fb.
  xx
  j
• Ivan
  Great stuff
  grts
  Ivan.
  killea: Thank you Ivan
  
  xx
• yellow
  Like you speak about the old smell of things
  en when you talk about the women in that lift
  i'm feeling a litlle bit erotic tension.
  Mayby that was not the meaning but I think it's because i'm a man but you give it some feeling to use such words.
  
  I have to say something about the story,
  this year I went with my family to disney and there was
  a new atraction with a fatal lift based on an old horor-film,
  your story let me think to this on the end with the woman who looked a little bit scary.
  
  sorry for mistakes but i try to learn writing Englisch.
  
  sweets,
  Marc
  
  
  killea: thank you Marc. If you want erotic you should read the Magician, but try and read the other stories too, in due course. Great FB
  xxx
  j
• GoNo2
  Eerste deel viel goed mee, heb er van genoten.....zal verder lezen
  killea: thank you love
  xx
  j