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killea: Will do - thanks again
lijkt mij spannend.
Don't wait to long for the next part.
killea: It is already in 'opslaan' and will go on at midnight. Thanks for reading my work.
It's getting better.
ga door en niet stoppen.
killea: Thanks for your support.
Don't worry about me reading you! If I dig in, I dig in deep ! :o)
For me, you have a lot of margin to make your stories a bit longer and elaborated, as the writing is sublime!
He scramble => He scrambleD
the boulder he had tried to move was still situated => does situated not need some additions, like 'at the same place'; of course, not being a native speaker (nor reader ;o), could be my English leaves me wanting...:o), so keep that in mind before being to harsh in your reply!
killea: I'll have to check but not now. It is extremely hard to edit one's own work so I appreciate anything you point out. I try to be a perfectionist, but I am a speed reader and well that's it.
thanks ever so much for fb
killea: Appreciate you reading me, Master writer, you!
mooi verhaal, hij vond nog niets,
wie was die geest dan :)
killea: Continue reading and you'll find out. Thanks for FB
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killea: Thank you so much, Noel
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