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  • Francis
    Exellent!! Just one but.. You make me not hungry to kill my exwife anymore!! Very good story. Makes me wunder.
    xx Frans
    killea: Thanks - don't wonder - exes are not exes for nothing!
    xx
    june
  • Ghislaine
    You make me wonder for the rest of your work.
    killea: Thank you so much for your FB. Appreciate you reading my work.

    xx
    June
  • marrik
    DE straf past goed,maar kan erger.Mooi vehaal.
    killea: Appreciate it. thnks
    xx
    June
  • klaver4
    This could very well have been an episode (as well as the previous one) of Hammerhouse of Hell, I used to watch on ITV in the old days!
    Julia reminds me of vixen in the new Battlestar Galaxy series! Except for the blonde hair of course.
    ps's:
    some time she told him to get dressed and packed they: => and packed; they
    very much interested to Dr. Sorens=> interest
    xx
    klaver4

    killea: Thanks for great feedback. situated - in your last fb is correct as is. Have to check above again. should be a semi colon - perhaps a typo. and should be interest. WEll done, you are my personal editor. thanks.

    xx
  • Ivan
    Grts Ivan
    killea: thks
    j
  • Mephistopheles
    Splendid! I've seen that your last name is flemish, yet you write fluently in english...which is your native tongue?
    killea: English, grew up Australian, but of Irish background.
    thanks you for your generous FB
    xx
    j
  • yellow
    knap einde van dit verhaal euhm....
    ja, er kwam genoeg seks in en ja,
    het moet wat zijn,
    het zal hem leren zijn vrouw te vermoorden...


    je moet er maar opkomen,
    goed gedaan June

    liefs

    Marc
    xx
    killea: You haven't read anything yet. Wait till get to The Magician!
    thanks for reading me
    love
    June
  • GoNo2
    Feitelijk zou het in boekvorm moeten uitgegeven zijn, kon ik het meenemen naar bed !
    killea: Thank you so much, Noel
    xxx
    j
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