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  • Francis
    Nothing compares to you
    Stephi will become Stephi Graf isn't it? ;0)
    Gr xx Frans
    killea: She'll become someone but not a Graf.
    xx
    thanks June
  • marrik
    Verdorie, dit zijn toch de betere verhalen aan het worden.
    Ik ben een fan.

    Marcel
    killea: thks, love
    xx
    June
  • klaver4
    Wonderful story writing ! Really, a true delight and treat!
    I was thinking, I'm going to bed, but then I saw you go online, and you reminded me...:o)
    Ps's (sorry for the nuisance, past the hour of the beast..;o):
    He mentioned to Cecilia=> He mentioned IT to.. ?
    at the Chemist => capital ?
    drinkS plenty of fluids?
    making nuisance pranks?=>exclamation mark ?
    and on the Thursday => loose the?
    Thanks to Juf Jaspers=> if 'Juf' in Juf Japsers isn't English, which I don't know, it should be between ' '(the word escapes me) I suspect

    xx
    klaver4

    killea: Hi Benedict, it is so good to have you read my work. i will check it all out and make corrections. You are my private editor. Wrote Juf just because it is basically a dutch story. A howling thanks. Have started a new one again, this time it is a daunting project, and wonder whether to continue at all. A howling thanks for feedback and encouragement.

    many xxx
  • Ivan
    grts
    Ivan
    killea: thank you

    xx
  • Mephistopheles
    I expected nothing less. Very good writing.
    killea: thank you, sweetheart
    xx
    j
  • yellow
    rakend schrijven,
    ocharme het meisje, zo mishandeld worden,
    en dan die ster,
    groetjes,
    M.
    killea: Thanks for reading me, Marc
    xxx
    j
  • GoNo2
    Verdorie, i like your style
    killea: Thank you so much, Noel
    xxx
    j
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