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Stephi will become Stephi Graf isn't it? ;0)
Gr xx Frans
killea: She'll become someone but not a Graf.
Verdorie, dit zijn toch de betere verhalen aan het worden.
Ik ben een fan.
killea: thks, love
Wonderful story writing ! Really, a true delight and treat!
I was thinking, I'm going to bed, but then I saw you go online, and you reminded me...:o)
Ps's (sorry for the nuisance, past the hour of the beast..;o):
He mentioned to Cecilia=> He mentioned IT to.. ?
at the Chemist => capital ?
drinkS plenty of fluids?
making nuisance pranks?=>exclamation mark ?
and on the Thursday => loose the?
Thanks to Juf Jaspers=> if 'Juf' in Juf Japsers isn't English, which I don't know, it should be between ' '(the word escapes me) I suspect
killea: Hi Benedict, it is so good to have you read my work. i will check it all out and make corrections. You are my private editor. Wrote Juf just because it is basically a dutch story. A howling thanks. Have started a new one again, this time it is a daunting project, and wonder whether to continue at all. A howling thanks for feedback and encouragement.
killea: thank you
I expected nothing less. Very good writing.
killea: thank you, sweetheart
ocharme het meisje, zo mishandeld worden,
en dan die ster,
killea: Thanks for reading me, Marc
Verdorie, i like your style
killea: Thank you so much, Noel