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  • marrik
    Gut.Wat zal de wraak van Martin zoet zijn.Ik kan hem wel een paar tips geven.Hij heeft het juiste motief.Kan niet wachten op het vervolg.

    GRTZ
    killea: Thanks, my faithful reader!
    xx
    June
  • Francis

    Just a tiny bit of catshit in someones food will make them blind or will die, a hint? Or concrete feet turn them into fishfood..
    Gr Frans xx
    killea: thanks, Frans

    xx
    June
  • Magdalena
    hoe boeiend!!!

    opmerking: 'As usual their discussion always included IRIS (not Eva??)....'

    xxxx
    killea: Just checked and no Eva is Martin's ex/ Iris is a woman at work, but found I made an error between Eva and Ella, so thank you so much for the feedback. It is quite difficult to edit one's own writing, so I truly appreciate it. Will try and finish it on the weekend

    xx
    June
  • klaver4
    Wonderful how you give insight into the caracters of your story!
    Dennis is evil, that's clear: for me that' s the difference between good-bad (and they really do exist): Bad people manipulete or try to if they have a bad day, bad luck or when facing very balanced people, the weak spot in weaker people; good people cherish that weak spot!
    xx
    Dicky
    killea: You know Dicky, I can never tell where a story leads me, as long as I know the ending, i can start. If i don't know the ending, I have to wait until it shoots into my head. The characters also come and do their thing. I don't plan anything before hand.
    The one I am working on now, I have had to write everyones name down so I don't forget or have to scroll back each time thinking- oh that was whatshisname??

    Appreciate your fb thanks. junie
  • Ivan
    grts Ivan
    killea: thank you, Ivan

    xx
  • Mephistopheles
    June, do you rent or own? I'm talking about your wings, you angel. Great writing!
    killea: Wow, thank you for the compliment.
    xxx
    j
  • yellow
    mooi, geschreven, benieuwd hoe het verder loopt, misschien moet het huis eerst gezuiverd worden ofzo:)
    liefs,
    M.
    killea: thanks for reading me and FB
    love
    june
  • GoNo2
    Diene duivelse geest was ik...
    killea: Thank you, Noel
    xx
    j
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