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Teardrop (11je)
my
heart lies
in a desert
hopelessly waiting for a
teardrop
feedback van andere lezers- marrik
Wat als er geen tranen meer zijn?
Deksels mooi 11je.
XX
M killea: maybe a camel can dump on it, and it can be put to some use to cook a berber's meal.
thks
j - yellow
prachtig,
hopelijk kom je snel in vruchtbare gebieden,
groetjes,
Marc killea: Thank you yellow, appreciate your fb always
xx
j - otiske
I can feel the teardrop in this work.
great.
Nice and beautiful, greetz. killea: You are too generous, thank you otiske
xx
j - DeKoeneRidder
More beautifull is impossible....WOW my Irish Queen.
Fat X BH killea: I thank you, braveheart
xx
j - aquaangel
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........*Hug* .... killea: Wow! nothing else i can say.
love
j - Francis
(Wit)Biertje?
Gr Frans killea: Umm, love it, in the sun!
xxxx
j - jan
out of tears?
grts killea: not yet, darling
xx
j - alie_jankind
mooi gedicht,
al zou ik niet met a eindigen in regel 4
still hopelessly waiting for
teardrops
zie maar ...
groeten
killea: ONe would have done it for me. Thanks for great fb
Alie
xx
j - jamal
let it rain very soon my dear....
a beauty!!
xx killea: thank you Jamal
xx
june - lucky
ik schoot in de lach hahahahaha killea: Yes, it is funny!
xx
j
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