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Serendipity
there were so many signs leading to you
mystical coincidences, and in the night
an angel, I think, gave me the final push
now we have broken, and spoken
opened up to each other's worlds
feeling love pure unfurled
we agreed never to promise
that which we cannot keep,
but to keep each promise made
and I will hold true
what you gave my heart
and undernourished soul
today, tomorrow and forever
I will love you, close or afar
as my lover, confidant or friend
feedback van andere lezers- lief
it should always be like that, don't make promises
you can't keep...
xxx
liefs
killea: Thank you Liefie
xxx
j - marrik
Thank you love.Remember. I will always love, but you never know how much.
XXX
M
killea: No I never will.
xx
j - matahari
Ben diep gelukkig dat jouw vertrouwen niet werd beschaamd!
Heel veel liefs xx matahari
killea: thank you, matahari
xxx
j - nero
Broken and spoken - combination I don't understand - but I'm sure you 'll explain sometime.
Love xxx Nero
killea: Yes, perhaps I will
xx
j - Mistaker
I like this poem very much!
Greta x
killea: Thank you Greta love, your FB so generous
xxx
j - lin
prachtig, werkelijk vertederend mooi, liefs lin
killea: Thank you ever so much, lin
\xx
J - Vanes
the word serendipity is poem in itself, beautiful!
killea: Is'nt it just a word to love
xx
j - DeKoeneRidder
It's a shame to read such a drame in this beautifull poem!
XXX MQ
YBH
killea: All poems are drama of one kind or the other, BH
xxx
j - jan
honesty is the finest virtue...
xx
j
killea: Thank you, Jan
xxx
j - Francis
Broken?
Is it riellie riellie broken???
Hope you don t recycle him if its such a good friend friends of ya
Real friends are collectorsitems these days
BEAu- beau- beau- Beautifull poem Junie
xx
killea: thanks, thanks, thanks -
xxx
j - yellow
very beautifull lovely poem,
greetzzz,
Marc
killea: Thank you,love
]xx
j - Rob
Toevalstreffer dus. _________^_^
killea: Don't believe in coincidences, Rob
thanks for fb
xx
j - otiske
Heel zacht en zuiver werkje.
Dit is een heel mooi gedicht.
Knap gedaan, groetjes.
killea: Thank you for great fb, otiske
xxx
j - Klaver4
very fragile but decided as well!
can either go way when you read it; a restart of something old or something completely new;
the 'or' in the last sentence makes you imagine an extra line: time will tell which one of the three. Or did you mean 'and' instead..:o)
very nice June !! going strong !
xx
dicky
killea: You are too kind with your lovely FB
thanks Dicky
j - backlash
True love knows no past tense, distance or conditions ...
xx
G.
killea: Thank you so much Backlash
xx
j
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