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Cheap and Free
Promises made
in the shade of the mind
distorted by the fumes
of tiny chimneys and wine
will never be kept
Promises made
in the sober light of day
unblurred vision
clear thoughts arranged
are usually never kept
Expectations are high
when promises are made
pain of endless disappointment
for the promisee
promises are cheap and free
feedback van andere lezers- nero
And oh so true !
xxx - Nero killea: Thank you, darling
xxx
j - yellow
en toch kunnen we proberen om de beloftes na te komen,
wanneer de romantiek hoog is, is het inderdaad makkelijker om beloftes te doen,
weer een prachtig werk killea,
groetjes,
Marc killea: Thank you Marc, appreciate it
xxx
j - Aramis
magistrale eerste strofe ! Heel knap ! killea: Thank you so much, Aramis
xxxx
j - jan
if they were true, they wouldn't make you blue..
xxxx
j
killea: And that is true!
xxx
j - jamal
lage verwachtingen leveren kleine teleurstellingen op....
maar toch, het is niet altijd gemakkelijk als je hart klopt.
xxx killea: So true, Jamal thanks
xxx
j - Mistaker
Oh, all the promises we made
All the meaningless and empty words...
Greta x
killea: Yes, that's true too, Greta
xxx
j - marrik
Dat is waarom ik nooit iets beloof.
XX
M killea: Thanks, darling
xx
j - DeKoeneRidder
I feel the dissapointment and sorrow in your words but one day, when the Belfast child sings again, we'll sing along.
Hang in there sweets!!! XXX J killea: Thanks, BH
xx
j - aquaangel
belofte maakt schuld he.. killea: Yes indeed,. Thanks for FB
xxxx
j - lief
nice!
liefs killea: Thank you LIef
xx
j - lucky
tax free killea: thanks Lucky
xx
j - otiske
Zo gaat het inderdaad vaak.
Toch blijven proberen.
Goed geschreven en graag gelezen, groetjes. killea: Again, many thanks for reading me.
xx
j
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