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Drowning
Can't take my eyes off you
even from a distance
you are all I can see
sleep gives no resistance
gladly drowning in your intensity
I awake to you watching me
wordless communication
tells me what you see
you touch me just in passing
flames of passion ensue
the magic starts all over again
filled with the essence of you
hours of separation
keep me yearning for more
my world so enriched
by the key to your door
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qXwWT2Chx64
feedback van andere lezers- GoNo2
Knap! killea: thank you, Noel
xx
j - miepe
ô how naais it is and all that lovelys of love
ggg!
bjoetiefoel agin! killea: Oh yes, Miepele
xxxx
j - ivo
het slepende van de muziek (youtube) samen met het gedicht maakt het een mooi gevoel dat herkenbaar 'lief' is. killea: thank you, Ivo
xx
j - jan
how sweet it is to be in love June,
xx
j killea: Yes, it is soooo sweet, Jan
xxx
j - tessy
Mooi om getuige te mogen zijn van deze liefde ;-) killea: Thank you, Tessy
xxx
j - yellow
you both, take a cold shower to cool down but be carefull because cold make some things smaller(with man)
love,
M.
x killea: No Marc, no cold showers will ever be required if it is up to me!
ha ha
xxx
j - Mistaker
Beautiful love...
Greta xx killea: thank you Greta
xx
j - klaver4
a racing heart, searching for breath; drowning is a bit, how should I say it..., for this nice love poem!
xx
klaver4 killea: yes, I should have used the word 'wallowing' but I didn't......
xxx
j
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