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So much more
You are so much more
life exciting, troubled and raw
perception of others limited, close
you ran the gamut and chose
didn't care to fit in the norm
always alert, willing to transform
never, never gave up to dream
ever hopeful it would seem
illness, so very hard to treat
often conceding to unbearable defeat
never, never close that door
you are so very, very much more...
feedback van andere lezers- ivo
een zeer bemoedigend vers voor wie dit lezend begrijpt .. killea: appreciate your fine FB Ivo
xxx
j - jan
tender words which give piece of mind,
love it June!
xxx
j killea: many thanks, love
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j - Liesje
Ik kan alleen maar Ivo volgen!
Opnieuw een heel sterk schrijven! killea: appreciate it, Liesje
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j - ppe
dit lijkt uit je hart geschreven te zijn killea: indeed, ppe many thanks
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j - Magdalena
een soort ode, aanmoediging, maar ook... ongerustheid???
veel sterkte meisje! killea: thank you Magdalena
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j - Breyn_Del_Arlet
ik vind het prachtig Killea
Grtjs
Arlet killea: Many thanks, Arlet
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j - Mistaker
So true!
Wonderful poem June.
Greta xx killea: Thank you Greta, appreciate your FB
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j - jamal
ik had je allang door....je bent geen doorsnee, meer dan mens!
what a power, I respect! killea: many thanks, Jamal
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j - yellow
it's like you talking about me,
so this poem is moving me emotional,
you are a real emo-writer J.
xxx killea: Thank you sweetheart
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j - tessy
prachtig killea: Thank you lovely Tessy
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j - klaver4
Rage rage against the dying of the light...
If I would be in that persons situation, I would be mighty glad with this confirmation and love of what that person stands for!
(just hope for you it's not too close to home)
xxx
klaver4 killea: you understand it so well, Dicky
xx
j
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