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The Wind
When was the wind first heard
the rush of invisible movement
pushing for change, coaxing onward
not a wind, but the Wind indicative of change
unwavering, murmuring the song
calling the next chapter to be written, right or wrong
so many lives lived in one
emotions unseen, verbalized in a dream
despite simple longings of what
once seemed so thrilling, so real
a wicked, improbable spiel
and the wind pushes ever forward
away, away from what went before
onwards, destiny's wind once more
we sit and talk into the night
searing pangs of yesterdays
propelling a free flow of tears
again exposing hidden pain
overflowing the stillness of the hour
colours of passion, blood and power
for every day of being together
no solitude needed or desired
we live in the reflective mirrors
with clarity of eyes, sleepless
each sunken in thoughts, deeply
immersed in the subconscious pull
more than ever before, as tomorrow knocks
relentlessly on the bolted door
along the beach we run faster and faster
freedom no, life, fills panting lungs
ravages of time remain unseen
on the presented countenance
nothing gone, but reasoning clear
holding my hand, you understand the fear
and the wind blows in from the sea
for the countless time setting us free
to ride out storms, and love to just be…
feedback van andere lezers- ivo
laat de wind waaien en laat je meenemen door de kracht van het zijn ... de liefde is zo belangrijk in de mens ... killea: thank you Ivo
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j - secret
prachtig killea
liefs killea: many thanks Secret
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j - jan
a masterpiece!
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j killea: thank you for fine FB Jan
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j - bragt
dit is meeslepend, prachtig ritme killea: Many thanks for fine FB bragt
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j - ppe
beautiful killea: many thanks ppe
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j - Mistaker
Such a beautiful poem!
Greta xx killea: thank you so much Greta
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j - alie_jankind
let the wind blow ...
mooi beeld, vanut diepe bewogenheid
groeten killea: many thanks Alie
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j - Magdalena
Magnifiek, groots en tegelijkertijd gedetailleerd
you understand the fear killea: Thank you so much for fine FB Karine
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j - jamal
hoewel mijn Engels niet zo geweldig is en ik niet alles begrijp, neemt het gevoel in de delen die ik wel begrijp me zo op sleeptouw...echt heel sterk.
xxx killea: many thanks Jamal
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j - Liesje
heel knap neergepend! killea: many thanks Liesje
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j - yellow
de vorige reacties zeggen al genoeg, soms mag het eens lang zijn kan ook mooi zijn,
liefs,
M.
x killea: Thank you sweetheart
xx
j
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