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brutum fulmen
Pull me down
piece by piece
slowly drag me
through muddy grease
kick me hard
push me around
in one-sided shite
stand my ground
use your pen
like a knife
just a hiccup
in this life
but listen as
my crystal tears
silently but surely
shatter your ears
as each drop
falls on clay
I will arise
whilst you decay
muck on your spirit
won't wash away
feedback van andere lezers- jan
strong words with a desire to be...
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j killea: many thanks Jan
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j - ivo
ik volg jan helemaal killea: Thank you Ivo
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j - manono
Over iemand die heel boos en gekwetst is.
En zint op wraak.
Het is meer dan dat alleen. Over die boosheid en die gekwetstheid is ook over nagedacht: 'muck won't wash away.
Sterk beschreven.
killea: Many thanks manono
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j - Mistaker
Very strong poem indeed.
Greta xx killea: thank you sweetheart
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j - martine
sterk dit dicht killea
xxx killea: Many thanks, Martine
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j - Liesje
emotionaliteit troef, waardoor bij mij een stilte valt... killea: Thank you Liesje
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j - drebddronefish
Brutum fulmen indeed ofte fulmineren june
greets killea: that's it Manuel
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j - KapiteinSeBBos
alles aan elkaar geplakt daar hou ik niet van... killea: ik wel
xx
j
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