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Girl in Veil
She chose to reveal
the key to her soul
instead to reveal
these misleading doors
I can see nothing more
than truth in her eyes
and let be known
truth is beauty on its own
color of commitment
now drawn on her lips
head towards heaven
as a proud mans fist
ascended at times
when some may condemn
her veil dancing
to the movement she makes
leading to the path
not anyone can take
greatness is hers
if she's not to break
her promise to God
made on a dark rainy night
as she was in need of
change
ablution
higher dimensions of faith.
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Nogal spiritueel geacsentueerd gedicht waarin een andere cutuur aan bod komt waarin op een nogal puberale wijze de lofzang tot kuisheid wordt opgeroepen.
Willy - manono
Mooi gedicht, Persian. Ik lees niet zozeer kuisheid maar wel 'commitment' en 'in need of higher dimensions of faith'.
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- killea
Read your earlier poetry with pleasure. Although this poem doesn't speak to me, I do feel the beauty in your words. Would love to read something from you, with all due respect, a little outside your comfort zone, Damoun.
xx
j - hettie35
Graag gelezen,
groetjes Hettie
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