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Come with me
Come with me
Come with me on a journey
if you dare to fly high
beyond the moon
amongst the stars
or stay behind and sigh
watch me go I'm on my way
to greater heights of pleasure
the door is open, threshold passed
there is no longer measure
my time has come to spread
wings so fine and strong
listen carefully to the violin
playing my farewell song
Oh, come with me, go beyond
universal boundaries so tight
minds of limitation hold on
to you with all their might
or hold my hand once more
kiss me with passion freed
travel to the second level
where poets go to bleed
so hard and soft as the sea
we could write once more
wild horses we will ride
as we did once before
Won't you come with me……
feedback van andere lezers- aniram
sounds like a beautiful song killea!
killea: many thanks Michel
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j - ive
"Fly me to the moon and let me play among the stars
Let me see what spring is like on Jupiter and Mars"
Aan dit lied dacht ik toen ik jouw gedicht las.
... and than I heard violins playing ...
What of lovely way of reading!
Thanks!
killea: thank you so much Ive
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j - Hoeselaar
een sterk liefdesgedicht waarbij ik me voorstel zelfs tot achter de maan te reizen, goh, jammer dat ik al getrouwd ben en Abraham allengs vergeten ben
Willy
killea: indeed jammer Willy
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j - bragt
very strong & convincing temptation
killea: Many thanks Roel
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j - Wee
Super, Killea.
x
killea: thank you Wee
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j - jan
aha yeah... Godzilla just left the building, look out love!
killea: will do Jan
xxx
j - hettie35
Een pracht van een uitnodiging,
liefs Hettie
killea: many thanks Hettie
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j - Danvoieanne
Wat mooi deze , vliegen maar zou ik zo zeggen , groet
killea: thank you Anne
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j - ivo
hoho als men dit mij als vraag stelt ...
killea: Yes Ivo, what would you do?....thank you
xx
j - martine
wauw
prachtig dit liefdesdicht
killea: many thanks Martine
xx
j
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