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Concatenation of circumstances

door killea

Concatenation of circumstances



I woke up shivering
saw a huge shadow on the wall
for a moment thought it was you
reality slowly kicked in
it wasn't you at all

as naturally leaves' slow fall begin
no sign of your leave to come
from a war, one cannot win
your obligations much to high
to separation we must succumb

we could have made a memory
for a moment in time just flow
no news at all from Afghanistan
not a word to give me hope
to allow our love to grow…

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • hettie35
    Leef met je mee,
    liefs Hettie
    killea: Thank you Hettie
    xxx
    j
  • Rothe
    Ben onder de indruk ! Zeer gevoelig !!!!
    killea: many thanks Rothe
    xx
    j
  • Danvoieanne
    knap gevoelig xx
    killea: many thanks Anne
    xx
    j
  • andremoortgat
    The sun shines in Belgium
    and Afghanistan...
    only the shadow is very different !
    killea: shadow games, Andre
    xx
    j
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