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• Francis
  Nothing compares to you
  Stephi will become Stephi Graf isn't it? ;0)
  Gr xx Frans
  killea: She'll become someone but not a Graf.
  xx
  thanks June
• marrik
  Verdorie, dit zijn toch de betere verhalen aan het worden.
  Ik ben een fan.
  
  Marcel
  killea: thks, love
  xx
  June
• klaver4
  Wonderful story writing ! Really, a true delight and treat!
  I was thinking, I'm going to bed, but then I saw you go online, and you reminded me...:o)
  Ps's (sorry for the nuisance, past the hour of the beast..;o):
  He mentioned to Cecilia=> He mentioned IT to.. ?
  at the Chemist => capital ?
  drinkS plenty of fluids?
  making nuisance pranks?=>exclamation mark ?
  and on the Thursday => loose the?
  Thanks to Juf Jaspers=> if 'Juf' in Juf Japsers isn't English, which I don't know, it should be between ' '(the word escapes me) I suspect
  
  xx
  klaver4
  
  killea: Hi Benedict, it is so good to have you read my work. i will check it all out and make corrections. You are my private editor. Wrote Juf just because it is basically a dutch story. A howling thanks. Have started a new one again, this time it is a daunting project, and wonder whether to continue at all. A howling thanks for feedback and encouragement.
  
  many xxx
• Ivan
  grts
  Ivan
  killea: thank you
  
  xx
• Mephistopheles
  I expected nothing less. Very good writing.
  killea: thank you, sweetheart
  xx
  j
• yellow
  rakend schrijven,
  ocharme het meisje, zo mishandeld worden,
  en dan die ster,
  groetjes,
  M.
  killea: Thanks for reading me, Marc
  xxx
  j
• GoNo2
  Verdorie, i like your style
  killea: Thank you so much, Noel
  xxx
  j